Wisconsin Hells #2: The Devil You Know
I can't believe I actually found time to do a part two! In the past week my dog and fiance have both suffered horrible illnesses AND my AC went out during a heat wave. This was edited in a state of ninety-degree delirium while my house was being used as a sick ward. If anything about it sucks too bad blame the petroleum industry. On a more specific note: happy with how it turned out. I think my vignette-led approach to writing is slowly giving way to the kind of abrupt promptness you find in the monthly comic books and sitcom/dramedies that inspired this series. I like to think my tendency to chew a bit of scenery gives the whole thing room to breathe, but your mileage will inevitably vary. While we're on the comic book line of thought, ah, I promise I won't ever do a cliffhanger as abrupt as this again. I think it rocks, it's my favorite part of the issue, but future stories will attempt to be more self-contained and fully-featured. But once aga...