Wisconsin Hells #1: Dell on Earth
Here it is, the inaugural full-length Wisconsin Hells story! It retains some of my more annoying tendencies (switching perspective mid-scene, still structurally being a collection of vignettes, not being half as funny as it was in my head...) but I'm ready to call it done. I'm really pretty proud of most of the gags here, and the characterization too. Charlie gets the bulk of the excellent stuff, I was glad to finally treat him as more than comic relief - his monologue at the end is my favorite writing I've done for this series. Honestly though, and maybe this is just because I've written so much less of them, I think the parts I'm overall fondest of are the bits with the side characters. We'll definitely be seeing more of 'em. So yeah on the whole, happy with what I did here while also excited to move on to more interesting things than setup. I think the breezy pace here can partly be blamed on the fact I've been sitting on these characters f...